SuperAscendedZAIN's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Scale of the Universe]

Well done!

Very well done, A large amount of information given in a very nice way. Thing i noticed the most that irritated me though, was that there was often too much information on the screen at one time, and it made reading it all difficult. Manualy sliding the bar made it so that i would zoom past some things, and have to go back to read them. Often times, those thin gs i had to read where not centered on the screen, or something like that. Just something that i noticed. Great job, Love it. You should do something else like this, but with a timeline in history or something.

[Pixel Wars V0.75]

Fairly good,

Need s a bit better attack response, maybe fix some collision glitches.. Defiantely add sound. Even in retro games they have musik.

[Custom Pong]

PRetty cool

It was entertaining for a while, then i glitched it out. Turns out if you gtet the ball to the bottom, and launch it across horizontally, it will get stuck down there, and not bounce out, unless you want to give the computer a poiint.
Other that that, well done, add some Backgrounds, musicz, and some more customizable options, and i Garauntee you people like me will play for hours :D

[Simple Puzz]

.. Huh?

I really could not figure out what the object of the puzzle was. All i could do with that was make funny pictures..
I think you should go ahead and try to develop the puzzle more. Adding instructions as well, may be a grand idea.

[basic game]

meh

Needs better song, that lasts longer.
Pretty nice idea.
Fix it so that when you collide with the side of a platform, you keep falling down, rather than morph into the platform.
PLus, kill them when they leave the screen xD I was running around off the screen wondering wtf xD
Adding some sound effects wouldnt hurt either.
All in all, good idea, great start, needs a lotta work.

Keep working on it ;)

[Thing-Thing 4]

lolz

Wow, I've played Thing thing since it was only thing thing one.

now i see that its made its way to NG.
diseasedproductions.net FTW

awesome job BTW, again.

[bleach battles!!!]

Pretty good

It was pretty good, as the title to this review says.. Anyways, there where some issues with the play button in the preloader. Uhm, you should add a controls page so people know what to do. I think the custom cursor was a little much. Uhm.. Hmm.. More levels is a given, and you might want to think about a different design for the health bar. Possibly also add to each level a thing before hand saying the objective, and hints or warnings. That about all i can think of right now. really good, make a full one.

[Sprite Sheet Tutorial]

Pretty Good..

Like the person before me said, the next button and music on/off. Also, better credits, like. You know, maybe putting the song in the credits xD THough i think most of us kno that was Superman by Three Doors Down. Unless i'm wrong then i suck and needed the credits that didnt exist :0 xD just messin`

in any case, you did realy good. You even taught me something. the thing with the plus sign, i never knew <-<;;

Shawn responds:

Thanks for the review and the song is Kryptonite by 3 doors down but mostly is known as superman

[-Find the Salty Dick-]

Good.. but..

Great concept, poor execution. I found all the clocks, but some of them, i think about two, where realy realy difficult.
My suggestions, fix the sound so it always plays, unless turned off. Make the pics better quality, or better yet, draw your own. Make the clock faces a tad bigger so its no so difficult. and add more levels.

Thats about all i have to say. alright job, you can do better. I look forward to seeing it ^_^

Altarus responds:

Sound fixed. I'll use the other suggestions if I make a sequel. Thanks for the good review.